Sunday, March 1, 2009

AP Style M-R

1) He hopes to make $1 billion dollars by the time he’s 40. Already he figures his net worth is between $2- and $3 million, depending on current stock prices.

2) Lt. Col. John Carpenter was an ensign at the U.S. Naval Academy and served in the 7th Fleet.

3) Twenty-one winners were named two days after the third annual procrastination awards ceremony.

4) It was a one-sided game, and he was a poor loser. After losing the play-off when his ball went out of bounds, he made an off-color remark that could be heard in the stands.

5) Hundreds of people attended Sunday’s race to watch 75 top bicyclists pedal across the finish line.

6) Every winter, the Joneses and the Kinneys pore over travel brochures, planning their summer trip together. This year they’re hoping to go to Panama City, Florida.

1 comment:

  1. 1) $1 billion or a billion dollars; $2- is not correct - see the "millions, billions" entry in the AP Stylebook.
    2) The U.S. Navy doesn't have the rank of Lt. Col., and you can't be an ensign and a Lt. Col. at the same time. See the "military academies" entry in the AP Stylebook.

    You got the rest. 16/20

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